One of the hallmarks of skilled writing is the ability to
draw the reader into the world you’ve created.
The reader wants to have sympathy for your character. He
wants to feel what your character feels and experience what the character experiences.
One of the primary reasons for recreational reading is to escape from reality
and be somewhere else.
If your story doesn’t draw the reader in quickly, he will
lose interest. Your story must pop with experiences that use the senses. Immerse
your reader in sensory experiences. He must be able to touch, taste, smell, hear,
and see the world you’ve created. Your job is to find words that convey those
messages.